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May Edition

Post by 9_red_monkey » Thu Apr 29, 2010 3:09 am

Please check over this. Im gonna put it out on the first. Does anything need changed or added or edited? Anything anyone doesnt like. Speak now or forever hold your peace.
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Re: May Edition

Post by 9_red_monkey » Thu Apr 29, 2010 5:49 am

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Re: May Edition

Post by Dr Brad » Thu Apr 29, 2010 6:39 am

Looks good, Red. :)

Is it just me or are there a few images that aren't loading?
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Re: May Edition

Post by 9_red_monkey » Thu Apr 29, 2010 6:52 am

it wasnt loading for a few but should be good now.

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Re: May Edition

Post by Sir Chris » Thu Apr 29, 2010 3:20 pm

I see no editing needs.

Another excellent edition!!

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Re: May Edition

Post by 9_red_monkey » Thu Apr 29, 2010 3:27 pm

Tyvm.....the writers did great!

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Re: May Edition

Post by onezerobin » Thu Apr 29, 2010 4:01 pm

Dear Awesome Editor :)

I request a very small change. Near the polls, would you please replace the word "old farts" with "mature folks" or "old folks"?

(If you want to throw things at me at this point, I totally understand :lol: )

Rest of the paper looks great. I liked how you added the new skill icons to the graphics.

p.s: I still can't find the ninja, lol.

-Pestering Nitpicky Staff
(Don't fire me please, I need this job to pay my POH rent :(( )

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Re: May Edition

Post by 9_red_monkey » Thu Apr 29, 2010 4:18 pm

That ok Avi?

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Re: May Edition

Post by onezerobin » Thu Apr 29, 2010 4:36 pm

Ty Red !!! Also I found the ninja hehe. He's hiding very well :D

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